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Hey again to all my brony watchers and everyone who watches my MLP work regardless. I know that you've already seen a lot of my work before, but this one is probably one that I'm a tad bit conflicted over.

You see, when I created Luna's Starry Night [link] I was driven by personal comparisons between the subtle meanings behind Starry Night, Van Gogh's personal life, and Luna's nature to the MLP:FiM fandom. I took all of these into consideration and even constantly listened to fan-made songs about the princess when making it.

I felt proud of what I did with that piece, but I can't say the same thing for Celestia. In this I was trying to tie together "Celestia, the bringer of Light" with "Monet, the painter of Light" which fits in my mind as I can now understand how topics so positive and optimistic can still be so avant gard in contemporary society; in other words, Society's initial view of Monet during his contemporary life, compared to The Brony Fandom in our lives. 
If you're head hurts a little, I do apologize. 

All that aside, I do feel like my picture is severely lacking. That's why I waited over a month to upload it because I wanted a premium membership to activate critiques. Anyone who is still reading, I humbly ask for your honestly brutal critique on this. Is it perfect? Should I give this piece another shot? Am I doing something harmful by comparing a fictional cartoon character princess to one of the most prolific modern artists ever known? Did I even capture the magic that Monet expressed every time he touched paint to a canvas? 
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Before I begin, I'll summarize by saying that this is a fine portrait of Celestia, but I don't feel you accomplished what you set out to do.

I'll be honest: You're right in that this piece did not effectively accomplish what your previous piece did, which is to capture Equestria in the style of a famous artist. A Starry Night in Equestria was powerful in that you instantly could tell where its inspiration had come from, but I really did not see Monet's influence in this piece.

My advice would be to take another hard look at Monet's famous works and try again. This piece is far too...crisp...to be a Monet impressionist painting.

Also read up on the things Monet tended to focus on, such as the way light reflects on certain surfaces.

Like I said: Good Celestia portrait, but it's not so much a Monet-inspired piece. Don't despair; try again after some research and I know you'll make a stunning work of art.